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Tattoo art question!!! (20 Characters)?

I want very much to get a tattoo. I’m 18 yrs old and I already know what I want. Its a Billy Joel song called Lullaby, (just the chorus). But it is a little long. I was hoping if I post the lyrics you can make some sujestions on what I can shorten it too.
These are the lyrics. I already know where I am putting the tattoo so I don’t need help there

*Verse 1*
Good night my angel time to close you eyes
And save these questions for another day
I think I know what you’ve been asking me
I think you know what I’ve been trying to say

I promised I would never leave you
And you should always know
Where ever you may go
No matter where you are
I never will be far away

*Verse 2*
Good night my angel now it’s time to sleep
And still so many things I want to say
Remember all the songs you sang for me
When we went sailing on an emerald bay

And like a boat out on the ocean
I’m rocking you to sleep
The water’s dark and deep
Inside this ancient heart
You’ll always be a part of me

(Musical Bridge)
Do do do do…

*Verse 3*
Goodnight my angel now it’s time to dream
And dream how wondeful your life will be
Someday your child will cry and if you sing this lullaby
Then in your heart there will always be a part of me

Someday we’ll all be gone
But lullabies go on and on
They never die that’s how you and I will be

Thanks all
Juli-

Good point. My bad. I want to get it on my upper thigh.

Also!! I am getting it for my dad. I wanted to get the quote "I promise I will never leave you" and then my dads birthday ( 8/28/69)
Blondie-
That is what I was going to get but it seems so long. I was thinking "I never will be far away
8/28/69"

  1. Juli
    October 30th, 2010 at 06:26 | #1

    Can you share with us where you want to put it– I’ll check back– but knowing how much space to work with can help to decide how best to shorten it. Thanks!

    I like the quote "I promised would never leave you"

    I also like a paraphrase from the last verse– "Lullibies never die" That way, it’s a message that means something special to you.

    But I think that’s a sweet tattoo, Good luck!

  2. clowndani
    October 30th, 2010 at 06:26 | #2

    Geez, that is long, and yeah, how can you shorten it?

    Id be MAYBE getting the artist to do a sketch of your dad and his birthdate etc. Perhaps just use the ‘lullabies go on and on’ part.
    That is the main message you are trying to point out isnt it? If you get a pic of your dad, then it will make it even more closer to heart and home for you maybe!

    hope that helps a little

  3. blondie
    October 30th, 2010 at 06:26 | #3

    I promised I would never leave you
    And you should always know
    Where ever you may go
    No matter where you are
    I never will be far away

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